1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential). WWW: This is a good assessment that shows real engagement with the issues and debates. You have clearly revised theory and the CSPs and use these well throughout. To pushup to B+... EBI: Written English. I know we've discussed this but Focus particularly on topic sentances in 20- mark questions. - content:cultural, historical or contemporary. More please! - sharp Focus on the Q required throughout 2) Read the whole mark scheme for this assessment carefully. Identify at least one potential point that you missed out on for each question in the assessment. Facial expressions – female models’ open mouths suggest lust, desire. Male model makes eye-contact with audience. Representation of female desire arguably reflects female empowerment McRobbie writes about in 1990s women’s magazines. Third-wave feminism – female sexua...