1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential). Total = 21 = C WWW - There are some really interesting ideas here that just need a little bit more clearity to push you into the top levels. Good use of theory and Q1 you decostruct the advert very well. EBI: - In Q1, you seem to confuse the different aspects of Reception theory and this holds you back. Revise this! In Q2, the second half of your essay lacks clarity and examples from the CSPs. Work on sharper topic sentences that focus on the question! 2) Read the whole mark scheme for this assessment carefully. Identify five specific aspects from Figure 1 (the Google Home advert) that you could have mentioned in your answer (e.g. selection of image, framing and focus, colour, text etc.) Positions the Google Home device as at the heart of aspirational family life. Reinforces white, western, middle-class representation of family life to the exclusio